i have two questions1. why you wrote "wanna"? does it mean want to do something?
2. in english poems, do i need to follow the same ending style strickly as you did? for instance, you used words like "free thee apogee flee " , "seal deal real" ...
1. If I'm not wrong,
wanna = want to, in American english. I use it simply due to personal preference.
2. Ending the sentence with words having the same vowel is another personal preferance which inherited from Chinese poetry. I use it simply to make the poet more rhythmic and sounds cute. There is no such rules. Acctually when U search google for english poetries, as what I did, U will find many english poetry are not rhythmic at all....
2. Ending the sentence with words having the same vowel is another personal preferance which inherited from Chinese poetry. I use it simply to make the poet more rhythmic and sounds cute. There is no such rules. Acctually when U search google for english poetries, as what I did, U will find many english poetry are not rhythmic at all....
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