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Only in one’s dream can he be truly free,

Why I dreamed so hard but still can not fly to thee?

Peering at thee from the distant apogee,

Deep sorrow makes me sick and I wanna flee.



Mad, Sad and abandoned as me,

Illusion is no difference than a killing barley-bree.

That’s why I decided to forget it indeed

But, before I tear off all these,

Let me write down some lines

To the Fantastic dreams of a KID.

1. why you wrote "wanna"? does it mean want to do something?
2. in english poems, do i need to follow the same ending style strickly as you did? for instance, you used words like "free thee apogee flee " , "seal deal real" ...

wanna = want to, in American english. I use it simply due to personal preference.

2. Ending the sentence with words having the same vowel is another personal preferance which inherited from Chinese poetry. I use it simply to make the poet more rhythmic and sounds cute. There is no such rules. Acctually when U search google for english poetries, as what I did, U will find many english poetry are not rhythmic at all....

good try and keep it up! ^_^

说句肉麻的： 这是我收到的最好的过年礼。 ：）