【原创文学】To my Fantastic Dream
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作者:固守逃兵 (等级:3 - 略知一二,发帖:401) 发表:2004-01-13 00:16:49  楼主  关注此帖评分:
【原创文学】To my Fantastic Dream
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Only in one’s dream can he be truly free,

Why I dreamed so hard but still can not fly to thee?

Peering at thee from the distant apogee,

Deep sorrow makes me sick and I wanna flee.



Mad, Sad and abandoned as me,

Illusion is no difference than a killing barley-bree.

That’s why I decided to forget it indeed

But, before I tear off all these,

Let me write down some lines

To the Fantastic dreams of a KID.
逃走,是为了在下一站更好的守候。 ---- 主席说:“我们不是撤退,是北上抗日!”
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作者:固守逃兵 (等级:3 - 略知一二,发帖:401) 发表:2004-01-18 15:53:57  2楼 评分:
i have two questions1. why you wrote "wanna"? does it mean want to do something? 2. in english poems, do i need to follow the same ending style strickly as you did? for instance, you used words like "free thee apogee flee " , "seal deal real" ...
1. If I'm not wrong,
wanna = want to, in American english. I use it simply due to personal preference.

2. Ending the sentence with words having the same vowel is another personal preferance which inherited from Chinese poetry. I use it simply to make the poet more rhythmic and sounds cute. There is no such rules. Acctually when U search google for english poetries, as what I did, U will find many english poetry are not rhythmic at all....
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作者:固守逃兵 (等级:3 - 略知一二,发帖:401) 发表:2004-01-22 15:30:28  3楼
this red club is awarded to the entire poemgood try and keep it up! ^_^
谢谢斑竹,
说句肉麻的: 这是我收到的最好的过年礼。 :)
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